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Post by shadowstorm on Feb 6, 2010 17:41:20 GMT -5
Shadowstorm trotted through the forest he had found. He was looking for wolves, not just one, but many. His muscles gliding under his shadowed pelt. He scented the air again, wolf scent hit his nostrils again and he kept moving. He wanted to be alpha of this pack, not knowing if there was one or not. If there was an alpha, he'd half to fight for the position. If there was an alphess, he'd have to convince her to be his mate. Something like that, he didn't know what to do, but he'd figure a way. No he just needed a wolf to find him.
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Post by nogardifer on Feb 6, 2010 17:45:58 GMT -5
I know I'm not staff, but, figured I'd just let you know. 1stly, you're not allowed to roleplay with your character until it's been approved by a staff member. When it is staff will post on your character page telling you so. And, 2nd, as the rules state, roleplay posts must be a minimum of 250 words. Tips for making your posts longer & better: 1.- Set the scene. What color the leaves of the tree's are. Is it windy, cold, sunny? Is it quiet? Is it peaceful, unsettling? 2.- How does your character interact with the setting? Does he creep silently through the under growth? Is he calmly observing the pack from afar? 3.- Elaborate on your characters thoughts. Just because our characters cant know what yours is thinking doesn't mean his thoughts don't exist Tell us what's going through his head, what're his motives? Is he wanting to become alpha solely for power, is it because he wants to help other wolves?
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Post by shadowstorm on Feb 8, 2010 11:42:26 GMT -5
srry. I just pmed Punk. After his bio is approved I'll fix this post.
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Post by ˟ PunkWolf on Feb 8, 2010 14:19:06 GMT -5
**Thread locked and moved into OOC Archives**
Feb 8, 2010 - 2:18PM Eastern Time
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