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Post by shadowed on Jan 6, 2010 1:53:32 GMT -5
Alright, this is edited and complete, I hope XD She wishes for the mountain pack, and eventually I will purchase the extras for her to exist as she is meant to be.
Name: Bloody Eye of the Hurricane. Nicknames: Typically goes by Bloodeye, but was also once known as Shadowed Eclipse. Desire pack: Mitsuteriasu Mountains Desired rank: Betess, but will settle for Subordinate until the time is right. Age: Recently reached the age of 5 years.
Looks: The most common colour of her pelt is a creamish-white colour; she has a mask of light orange upon her face, with the same colour running under her chest and underbelly, as well as her legs and each of her tailtips - of which, she has three. The tails are long, lushious and powerful, able to crack down on opponents like a whip. And they come with a treacherous secret - quills. Poisonous quills, at that. The tails may look lush and soft, but the quills are designed with the same shades of colour to match the fur on her body, deceiving opponents until a painful, venomous blow is dealt.
Her head is large and crowned by two curved horns, similar to those of a ram's, but not curving below the ears. They are also a lot lighter and more narrow; they are better for gouging than heavy headbutts. On her forehead is a simple, skull-shaped marking burned into her skin where the fur does not grow anymore. Her muzzle is quite broad, and her lower canines protrude from under her lips; blood-red in colour, they are both encursted with a small, sapphire gem, just like the cursed jewel she found. The neck is heavily maned and strong, with her shoulder and chest area being large and muscular. Her body narrows around the ribs and belly area, giving her a thin and shapely form. Her hips widen out from the waist, and her haunches are firm and muscular, just like the shoulders.
Overall, she has a fairly brutish appearance, while still portraying grace and femininity. 2'10" and 126 lbs Eyes: A ghastly shade of bloody crimson. Wings: N/A
Element: Poison - The poison is capable paralyzing targets and leaving terrible infections if not tended to properly - however, the poison is slow-acting, not instantaneous, though a distinct and painful burning sensation can be felt as the venom enters the body. She may have another hidden element, but for now it lays dormant and unknown.
Personality: Bloodeye has always seemed to portray mixed personalities, but her persona is a simple a concoction of deep feeling and the need to hide it. Normally quite snappy, cold and distant, she often couldn't care less about others or what happens to them - at least, that is the general image she expresses. She can change in an instant to be merciful and compassionate, but these bursts of strong emotion are rare in her. She does not know how to deal with her innermost feelings and thoughts, and rarely acts upon them as she truly sees fit in her mind, preferring to keep a tough front to avoid emotional openess. She does not respond well to those who pry too deep, and often gets very moody around intrusive wolves. Despite the constant deceit dealt to her in the past, she tends to be rather trusting, though she does not forgive and forget once the trust has been broken.
Bloodeye is stubborn and headstrong, not the type to back down from a fight nor admit defeat. She can be a little bit arrogant at times, more accustomed to taking the lead than following, though she is slowly learning to adapt to a more subordinate role in life. Because of this, she may be a little bit hard to get along with and tends to butt heads with many different wolves; however, she may enjoy the company of a calm, quiet and unassuming individual, and provide equal companionship to said individual. This wolfess loves to be admired, and has never minded being the center of attention for any reason. She especially welcomes the attentions of persistent males, and though she has an intolerance for big-mouthed, know-it-all pups, she thoroughly enjoys their admiration when it is shown appropriately.
Mother: Deelo. She was a small and dainty fae, with a creamy coloured coat marked with pastel orange hues over her face, chest, underbelly, legs and tail. Her eyes were brown and soft, a gateway to her innermost feelings, though in the last of her days they showed nothing more than her broken soul. Though a good and proud mother, Deelo had always been submissive, however, it is unclear whether she was born to be this way, or if it had been beaten into her as she grew. Father: Stoneye. Large brute with a black and gray coat, silver eyes. Dominant, aggressive, angry and abusive. A little mentally unstable. (will finish later) History: Bloodeye was born to a lowly femora by the name of Deelo, one abused by the Hurricane Pack's Alpha, Stoneye. She had little control over what happened to her daughters Bloodeye and Blackeye once they were weaned, though she did her best to protect them from the same abuse she had suffered. However, she was small and weak, and the Alpha and their older son Darkeye ganged up on her to opress her. Thus, Bloodeye and Blackeye underwent harsh training and punishment. At one point, Bloodeye's beloved mother grew very ill; however, in the last of her days, she murdered Stoneye in private. When the deed was discovered, the pack was too cowardly to punish her, surprised by her ability to overtake the Alpha in her weakened state. Even Darkeye did not know what to do, so he merely waited out her sickness until the day she died to seize power.
Bloodeye and her sister were persecuted harshly for their mother's betrayal, beaten and abused day after day. They did not blame their mother, for they knew the strength of her love, and what she had tried to do for them. But at the young age of 8 months, they took to the wilds, vowing to never return to that place. They were gone several days when Bloodeye discovered a strange jewel upon an ancient tree stump. It was a fang-shaped ruby with a small, sapphire gem encrusted on it. It attracted her youthful curiousity, and she needed to pick it up and show her sister how it shone. But as soon as she touched it, the cursed jewel's dark energy swirled around her and engulfed her, morphing her into a terrible beast of fury and rage.
In her initial rage she murdered her sister and followed the scent of the Hurricane Pack back to its origins, where she slaughtered many of the pack members, guilty or innocent of abusive behaviour. Darkeye, in all his cowardice, escaped at the expense of many other lives, and Bloodeye has never found him since. When the morning came and the bloodlust wore thin, her senses came to her and realization of her sister's death was all too real. She mourned gravely for her, but it was too late to go back and change things. She needed to go forth with her life, and so she did.
It was not until the age of three years that she came to a suitable place where she wished to settle and live. And here, she became the foundation of a new pack; Savage Shadow. She ruled and gained several loyal members, and met a mysterious, enthralling wolf by the name of Thorn. Though she snapped sarcastic remarks at him and put on the tough act around him, she could not deny her feelings for him. They soon bonded, and she welcomed him into her home. However, at one point during a pack meeting, a small arguement ascended to a bloody fight, and Thorn changed from intelligent, sweet and thoughtful to cold and violent. His jagged teeth found her throat, where he ripped with the intent to kill - she was lucky that he had just barely missed his mark. Though he left with many gashes, she felt he had done the most damage. Her heart was scarred deeply, her emotions sapped from her and her trust diminished. It seemed that his traitorous behaviour began a chain of betrayal, and after time and time again of being turned against, Bloodeye abandoned her newfound home.
Years later she came to another place that reminded her of her first home, and she settled in yet again to reign over claimed lands. Once more she found loyal members, but once more she was plagued by traitors. She had accepted Xain into her pack, and yet he turned on her, wishing to burn her alive. Though she had intended to defend herself, she was lucky that Blizzard Destruction had interfered, for he basically saved her life. Xain was exiled, and she took a great interest in her 'hero'. She allowed him to breed with her, only to find that he disappeared before the whelps' birth. Disappointed but not totally broken, she birthed the pups and raised them. One of her close and loyal packmates named her son, Ehrgeiz, while she named her daughter after the sister she had murdered, Blackeye. Earth Shine came into her life as the pups grew, and he loved both of the pups dearly, and they loved him back. Though he had bothered her initially, she came to grow used to his constant presence, and began to grow dependant upon it.
She became somewhat distraught when he disappeared, but she did her best not to show it and continue leading her pack. Although, her reign was to become short-lived as an unknown threat struck her pack, leaving herself and many of the pack violated, dead, or both. Upon awaking with little energy or strength, she found many bodies of the comrades she'd come to like, so it was a very disturbing scene for her. For several hours it felt like a nightmare, until her strength and energy were replenished, at which time she began to realize she was within reality. Some of the wolves she knew were never found, though their lively scents still lingered - this included both of her children. All she can do is hope that they are still alive, though she has seen no sign of them since the incident.
For a short time, Bloodeye joined a pack under the rule of Damean Jager. He seemed a good leader at first, but with his constant flakiness, Bloodeye became more and more unimpressed. She often had thoughts of taking over the pack, but the only pack member she hadn't butted heads with was the King's daughter, and she had high doubts that the femme would support her in an overthrow of her own father. Thus, becoming severely bored with the pack's disorganization, she left, still with hopes of finding someone familiar, whether it be her children or the brute who helped raised them. Tired of loneliness and instability, she has come to new and unfamiliar lands once again in hopes of finding a home that will not fail her. Other Info: She did not always have three tails, horns, deadly claws or her overgrown lower canines; they are inherent of the cursed jewel she came upon in her youth. Also, a darkness has enveloped her that was not natural to her, though it is unclear what element may lie hidden beneath.
Mate: She has mated only once, with a brute by the name of Blizzard Destruction. However, though there was some fondness attached, it was not a relationship based on emotion, and not long after the planned breeding, Destruction disappeared. She has had a heartfelt attachment to two others, by the names of Thorn and Earthshine. Thorn was her first friend and someone she allowed close to her heart, but he betrayed her and nearly killed her. She still has the scar on her throat from that incident. Earthshine was an admirer of hers, someone she did not like at first, though he had taken a liking to her children, and vice versa. She grew to enjoy his constant presence, though she now wonders where he could be. Pups: Blackeye and Ehrgeiz.
Zodiac Sign: Scorpio
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Post by Imaginatio on Jan 6, 2010 22:27:21 GMT -5
Well, this certainly is an impressive profile! I love the history, well thought out, and so sad =(. But there are a few things that need to be addressed;
-Looks must be a minimum of 250 words you have 201 words -I do believe extra tails would have to be bought at the Aelyn appendages shop, and the jems on her teeth to be bought at the [url=http://luriddestinies.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=shop&action=display&thread=341 ]accessories shop[/url]. You earn 5 Aelyn dollars each time you post in any area of the forum, then these dollars are used to buy extra appendages and accessories in the aforementioned shops. It shouldn't take long for you to earn enough money to buy these extra appendages, but if you could state that you have plans to buy them then that would be great. -Please specify which pack of the four we have available that you would like Bloodeye to join. If you make the necessary changes then I will be able to happily accept your wolf![/size]
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Post by shadowed on Jan 6, 2010 23:29:25 GMT -5
Woops, I'm sorry about my mistakes! I should have left up my message I previously had at the bottom of my profile, since I'm not finished it yet XD But I wonder, for the extra appendages, how could I possibly fit that into the roleplay? She has always been designed the way she is XD I mean, I'm not going to argue on this and aggrivate anybody, just asking if it is absolutely necessary for me to wait. 'Cause that's like... 40something posts before I could add what should already be a part of herXD Or maybe I should create a more acceptable character for the time being, save up my money points and wait? It would just seem very odd to bring her in with one tail, then have her magically grow two more as I have the money to buy them XD
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Post by - [s][w][a][y] - on Jan 6, 2010 23:57:36 GMT -5
At character creation, you can choose to have whatever you would like, its if you want additions after you're accepted that you have to buy them.
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Post by shadowed on Jan 7, 2010 0:15:18 GMT -5
Oooh, okay. So you're saying it's okay to keep her the way she is? Since I edited the profile, do you suppose she's about ready for acceptance now?
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Post by - [s][w][a][y] - on Jan 7, 2010 1:24:39 GMT -5
I'll leave the accepting up to Tio, because she started the process. As for the appendages and whatnot, you can start out with whatever you like, at least to my knowledge, though it might need to have a bit of editing and explaining in some aspects. I'll have to have a discussion with the staff about it, but having three tails and whatnot is fine.
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Post by Imaginatio on Jan 7, 2010 6:08:26 GMT -5
Oopsie, my bad. Okies, ignore the second part of my first post hehe. Well then, I can most happily declare this wolf as being;
Happy roleplaying!
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